Please revise my writing?

Question

It was obviously his guilty by reason of his brutally instinct and alcoholic. He calls his actions little household occurrences that are actually violent acts of murder. We can find narrator’s this attitude at the finishing of story, narrator keep his shirt on terribly when the cops came to his house for investigation. It can be also irony of human’s brutally instinct. Finally in “The black cat” Poe use symbolism to show human brutally. First of all, as I mention before the black cat is symbol of bad luck also we need attention to the name of the first black cat Pluto. In ancient Roman mythology, Pluto was the King of the Underworld and ruling over the abode of the dead. Pluto the cat, thus, symbolizes death to the narrator and we know the first black cat is symbolic of the narrator’s brutal mind. The Black Cat is “Poe's psychological study of domestic violence and guilt”. As he using some of technique; foreshadowing, irony, and symbolism make great work for describe human’s brutality

Answer 1

He was obviously guilty, due to the facts that he was instinctively brutal and alcoholic. His actions, which he calls "little household occurences" are actually violent, murderous acts. We can find this attitude at the end of the story. His shirt was mutilated when the cops came to his house for investigation. The humans' brutal instinct could also be ironic. Also, in "The Black Cat," Poe uses symbolism to show human brutality. The black cat has always been a symbol of bad luck. The first black cat was named Pluto, which was also the name of the King of the Underworld and the dead in Roman mythology. Thus, Pluto the cat, and, generally, all black cats, symbolize death to the narrator and Pluto, the cat, symbolizes his brutal mind. The Black Cat (underlined) is Poe's "psychological study of domestic violence and guilt." His use of techniques, such as foreshadowment, irony, and symbolism makes a great work that accurately describes human brutality.

Answer 2

well, i think that it's fine, but my english teacher always told us not to use first-person when analyzing a piece of writing. i noticed this when you said, "first of all, as I mentioned...". GOod Luck.