My very good friend posted an original poem of mine on here the other day that was very dark, so just to show another side of me, here is another original poem i wrote for her. i hope you enjoy it.
if i could hold you in my arms,
and learn the mystery's of your charms.
if i could see you face to face,
or feel the warmth of your embrace.
if i could look into your eyes,
and walk across the bridge of sighs.
if i could kiss you on your lips,
so tenderly.-(ohh, what bliss)
if i could run my fingers through the hair,
that frames your face,
to show i care.
if i could make you catch your breath,
from down deep inside your chest.
if i could feel your heaving breast,
as we made love,
my desire could rest.
if i could drink your nectar, from your cup,
without hesitation, i would drink it up.
if i could make your heart skip a beat,
this would make my day's complete.
if i could do all of the above,
then you would feel ,
my one true love.
Lance Watson 23/10
2007-12-08 18:50:37 · 10 answers · asked by ? 5 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
You are indeed an inigma my dear Watson.
Such lovely thoughts, such lovely words.
I truly hope you are happy as that is what I wish for you.
2007-12-09 23:35:42 · answer #1 · answered by ♥jg spunk♥ 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
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2016-11-14 23:56:22 · answer #2 · answered by mcclam 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You wrote that Beautiful Romantic Poem Roland???
that will make most womens ♥hearts miss a beat!!
I felt all warm inside just reading it.. so when your love reads it ♥♥♥♥!!! :):)
2007-12-08 19:23:08 · answer #3 · answered by ausblue 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
This is so beautiful. I love it so much. I am glad to see you posting your work here. No matter what the comments you recieve you a exposing your work for some who will see what wonderful work you have even when it's for ..........hehehe;~D
2007-12-08 19:15:00 · answer #4 · answered by ? 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Wow, I love it. I would be honored if you had written that for me. It's really good. Makes you warm all over.
2007-12-08 20:53:37 · answer #5 · answered by wolflady 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
* I enjoyed it very much! What a lucky lady she is*
2007-12-08 19:25:58 · answer #6 · answered by Me 7 · 2⤊ 0⤋
I did read this babe and it was beautiful. You are very talented.
2007-12-09 03:04:10 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Ooh, I feel warmer now.
2007-12-08 19:10:24 · answer #8 · answered by lulabellalu 6 · 2⤊ 0⤋
very nice
2007-12-08 19:03:55 · answer #9 · answered by ? 3 · 2⤊ 0⤋
i loved it :)
2007-12-09 00:45:22 · answer #10 · answered by jesse mary 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋