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I am right here i`ve gone nowhere my friend;
You look right past me no kind word or hand to lend.
Everyday i sit here and you dont seem to notice;
The sacrifice i make but what i propose is.
Take a minute from your busy life;
Hold out a hand your left or your right.
I will be there with no word to say;
Just a small smile and nuzzle my way.
My heart is like yours my fears just the same;
I get cold, i get hot, i get sick, i get lame.
Please dont think of me as a toy on a shelf;
To be taken down dusted off i am real like yourself.
All my love i give without cause;
Never do i hesitate wander or pause.
I am for you to hold and protect;
Not to push away, ignore or neglect.
My love is for you because you are all that i am;
Please dont ignore me just hold out you hand.

2007-12-08 03:33:05 · 5 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities Poetry

5 answers

Thats 100% fabulous. I really enjoyed it. See this is sad without being depressing about it.

2007-12-08 03:39:35 · answer #1 · answered by Delightful 6 · 2 0

To me, you are a slug in the sun. You are privy to a great becoming but you recognize nothing. You are an ant in the afterbirth. Before me you rightly tremble. But you owe me more than fear. YOU OWE ME AWE.

2007-12-08 03:37:31 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 2 0

Very good. Two thumbs way up.

2007-12-08 03:36:38 · answer #3 · answered by That one 7 · 1 0

wow. big words... you should publish it. You could really become a poet!

2007-12-08 03:36:33 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

Wow...it is amazing!!
You should def get it published
I LOVE POETRY

2007-12-08 03:36:08 · answer #5 · answered by 4 · 1 0

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