What do you think of this poem I wrote for someone I want to love someday ? I posetd it before, like a month ago and people said it totally sux and they suggested I may need some help......
I LOVE YOU
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Okay.... when I saw you I knew
Knew as in totally know
Know that it's you I love
Love thicker than veal
Veal, I eat after oatmeal
Oatmeal, I Love You too... for real.
2007-12-07 21:29:25 · 3 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
You sure you've been helped?
2007-12-07 21:41:18 · answer #1 · answered by Boy, Interrupted 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
well,nice try of you,its smart and thoughtful but it doesnt sound like a really love poem,its more funny,but then again this is my personal opinion~
2007-12-08 05:35:35 · answer #2 · answered by ₪₪₪AbsolutE₪₪₪ 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
You go, lover!
2007-12-08 05:41:16 · answer #3 · answered by Skatermomof5 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋