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I've got nowhere to turn, I've got
nowhere to hide, and I've got no alibi,
You've been following me, you know
my history, and no matter how hard I try,
I can't explain away
The way I feel today
There's only one thing I can say:

You, You've found me.
You found me and You called me from the wilderness,
From my cave of emptiness,
Yeah, You, You've found me.
You found me in the places of my lonliness
You told me there was more than this,
You captured me with tenderness,
Yeah, You've found me.

There was so many days, trying to
figure out ways to explain what I feel inside,
I tried to fill up my soul without
using control, this desire never did subside,
I'm ready to give in
I know I'll never win
The hide and seek that I've been in

In the pit of despair, I was all alone there.
I wasn't looking for You, but You found me anyway.
You put Your hand on face, then you changed my ways.
Nothing can separate me from...

You, You've found me.
You found me and You called me from the wilderness,
From my cave of emptiness,
Yeah, You, You've found me.
You found me in the places of my lonliness
You told me there was more than this,
You captured me with tenderness,
Yeah, You've found me.

2007-12-07 15:21:10 · 2 answers · asked by Scribbler 1 in Arts & Humanities Poetry

2 answers

The Scribbler has found mad love. I think some art may be forthcoming. TD

2007-12-07 16:13:51 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

Honest confessional piece with refrain - You've found me.

Rethink these lines:
- There was so many days (tense)
- The hide and seek that I've been in (fixed idiom)
- places of my lonliness (spelling)

These are excellent and memorable:
-cave of emptiness
-pit of despair


Oops! what was the question?
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2007-12-08 11:19:41 · answer #2 · answered by ari-pup 7 · 0 0

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