Your smile and face was so beautiful
Your heart was so ICE cold
I thought you made me happy
With all the lies you told
Are you ever going to get out of my head?
Maybe with time
Your love should come with a caution tag
Your love is such a crime
It feels like you left me so long ago
the months seems like years
I am so sick of this heartache
I am so sick of drowning in these tears
I pray often to God to bring me death in this life
I know if you ever heard me say that you would smile
God I cant believe I married you
I cannot believe you were my wife.
I have had so many sleepless nights
And all the tears I have cried
I bet you have not shed one tear for me
Because first you have to have a heart inside
I have never so much
LOVED and HATED
I hate to look at myself sometimes
Because I hate to see what you have created
Sometimes I feel so sorry for you
And all the guys after me
Sometimes I feel like putting a bullet in both out heads
To end the misery
2007-12-07 11:20:32 · 11 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Marriage & Divorce
Okay, if I was the intended recipient of the poem this is what I would think....
1) This dude is still hung up on me.... obviously he's spending way too much time thinking about me..
2) He sounds like he's trying to threaten or scare me.... which would push me away even more... and I'd consider taking it to the local police and get a restraining order.
3) The rationale in this poem would prove to me again why it is I chose to not be with you anymore...
As a reader, I am sorry for your pain, it is evident... and for your not being able to move on.. don't act on your feelings.. but give it time, do other things, and move on with your life.
2007-12-07 11:33:12 · answer #1 · answered by Wildflower 6 · 0⤊ 1⤋
It really seems like you need someone to talk to and I am very sad to hear that you have these crazy negative feelings bottled up inside. I hope that these are just words and nothing that you would really look to in life especially the ending of this poem. I cannot believe that someone can actually make you feel this horrible. The only time that I ever wished death in my own life was when I was younger and my boyfriend died and I didn't know how to deal with the loss of his life. Trust me as time had gone by it got easier and it has been 17 years since this happened and now things are so much better. If you need someone to talk to you can email me and I hope that life is going to be more positive for you. Are you divorced or separated?
2007-12-07 11:44:28 · answer #2 · answered by Eastcoast beachgirl 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sorry someone was soo awful to you but you obviously have a heart so dont let someone else change that about you. I think this poem shows how much she hurt you in your marriage and it gives the reader the idea she just left and never looked back. People that can hurt others that they claim to love to such a degree as this will do themselves in. Why waste any more emotion on her. Find the woman that will make you smile and appreciate the love you have to give. The best revenge on your ex is to be better and happier then she expects you to be without her. Good Luck
2007-12-07 11:27:22 · answer #3 · answered by n.s. 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
For me a poem has to have rhythm. It does not always need to rhyme nevertheless it demands to hit my feelings. I believe readability of expression is major as good. I do not love to moment wager what I'm studying approximately. I continuously seem for what I time period "poetic gemstones"within the textual content.
2016-09-05 11:19:34 · answer #4 · answered by giancola 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
This is fabulous and would make a great country song - send it to Carrie Underwood. I would, however, lose the bullet in the head part cause you could go to jail for writing that about someone.
2007-12-07 13:39:31 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
There's obviously ALOT of anger and bitterness. I really feel bad for you. I almost thought it was my soon to be ex husband that wrote it but the poem is too good . You really need to get out and enjoy yourself life is to short. It does get better.
2007-12-07 11:50:41 · answer #6 · answered by carmey1173 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Writing poetry is a good therapy. Write it all out. (I am assuming you are writing about what you are feeling.) But don't act on any violent thoughts. As a poem, pretty good.
2007-12-07 11:24:57 · answer #7 · answered by Linni 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It sounds like you need to get over it and get to another place in your heart/brain. always remember not all people are the same.
2007-12-07 11:31:01 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think the poem is very nice and there is better ways for you to pick up on girls. The problem for you is you need to leave your computer and bedroom to do so.
Go outside.
2007-12-07 11:24:24 · answer #9 · answered by box of rain 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Lost a soul mate. Don't worry after time your pain and sadness go away then you meet another female demon to screw you over!!!
2007-12-07 11:24:12 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋