death
Everybody dies
Theres no reason to be scared
It's happened for years
It's how you live life
Take a look in the mirror
And what do you see
Not about your cash
No use for it when you're dead
Just think about it
We are all equal
Death does not discriminate
No one gets a pass
All that matters then
Is how you handled your life
Thats the only thing
Just accept your fate
Because when your dead and gone
We are all just dust
2007-12-07 06:18:41 · 5 answers · asked by The Dark Prince 3 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
i like it very much thanks for posting these up they're fun to read lol
2007-12-07 06:23:08 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
not very beautiful,,,just states everything everyone already knows.
Need to add ideas that will get people in a state of 'wonderment'.
2007-12-07 15:01:15 · answer #2 · answered by E S 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i dont know why people write their prosaic thoughts in poetry section...
2007-12-07 14:58:15 · answer #3 · answered by jahaan 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
take it as it comes i guess.. i love your writing.. its all great
2007-12-07 15:19:38 · answer #4 · answered by dragonflyy 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
so true... what you say about death...
so many of us fear death.
2007-12-07 14:48:24 · answer #5 · answered by Analyst 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋