What is this story missing?

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What is this story missing?

Here is the link
http://www.associatedcontent.com/article/468176/teens_trigger_toilet_tissue_recall.html

What's missing and how would you have spiced it up?

2007-12-07 06:09:58 · 2 answers · asked by Jamerican Steve 7 in News & Events ➔ Media & Journalism

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Well, it kept me reading to the end and l wasn't bored. Maybe you could add some more about their misery, some people like that type of thing. But overall it was ok.

2007-12-07 10:42:15 · answer #1 · answered by edie 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋

2007-12-07 13:31:00 · answer #2 · answered by alexisphillips1994 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋