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Heaven is calling

Heaven is calling but i can't find my soul.
The more i look the less i see, the more i
think about it the more i want to be free.

Heaven is calling but where am i now,
I want to go home, I want to leave this
dreadful world filled with voilence and crime.

Heaven is calling and i still can't find my soul,
I'm ready to give up hope but my father needs me
i have to be bold.

Heaven is where i want to be, it' s the only place
i can be free. Free to sing, free to cry, free to be shy.

Heaven take me home, I'm old enough to understand
I'm fully grown. Heaven i want to go home.

2007-12-07 02:00:05 · 9 answers · asked by kelly 3 in Family & Relationships Other - Family & Relationships

9 answers

Sorry but I honestly don't like it. Writing a poem about heaven and wanting to die just doesn't go together and it doesn't sound right in my opinion. Generally someone who's thinking about dying is thinking about the hell they are living in and they aren't having thoughts about heaven. And how can heaven be calling if you can't find your soul? Again...doesn't make sense.

2007-12-07 02:18:35 · answer #1 · answered by . 6 · 1 0

The way I see it, the problem with society today is because most of the "churchy" crowd has let corrupt government and evil corporations rape and pillage this beautiful earth, all in the name of making a profit. And all the church crowd does is sit on their *** thinking Bush and Cheney are so heavenly, while wanting to get the hell out of here and go to your heaven. Whats up with that?

2007-12-07 02:09:06 · answer #2 · answered by Kelly L 5 · 0 0

About the poem, or about the person who wrote it.
first the poem is very well put together it is a cry for help. It is a feeling of overwhelmness. A feeling of despair. I think this person should look at the brighter things in life instead of looking for the way out.
Sometimes you can find your own heaven mind

2007-12-07 02:08:43 · answer #3 · answered by liz 2 · 0 1

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2016-12-17 10:17:26 · answer #4 · answered by inabinet 4 · 0 0

You need to come out of your confusion.Heaven and hell are in this very earth which you enjoy or suffer during your life time depending upon your good or wrong karma, in this birth and also in previous births.

2007-12-07 02:56:51 · answer #5 · answered by yogeshwargarg 7 · 0 0

you're here for a reason.

you haven't finished what you were sent to do.

you can quit and go home.

or you can suck up and do what you're here to do.

you know what you're supposed to do.

do it.

2007-12-07 02:04:59 · answer #6 · answered by KJ 6 · 0 1

Really good like it yes

2007-12-07 02:04:28 · answer #7 · answered by bette69 5 · 0 2

I LOVE IT!!!!
do you have anything else you've written?

2007-12-07 02:02:52 · answer #8 · answered by pammygurl 2 · 0 2

OMG!! that is reallyy good =]]

2007-12-07 02:03:51 · answer #9 · answered by natoshh 2 · 0 2

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