excessive smoking can risk your health and result to lung cancer.
1. i cant say in my opinion
2. it needs to just state ONE opinion
2007-12-06 15:09:39 · 7 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
two magical words, "I believe."
I believe that excessive smoking can risk...
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It seems to me that excessive smoking...
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I've noticed that excessive smoking...
2007-12-06 18:03:26 · answer #1 · answered by Mrs. Fitz 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Excessive smoking could risk your health and may result in lung cancer.
2007-12-06 23:13:50 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It has been medically proven that excessive smoking is a health risk.,because it causes lung cancer.
2007-12-07 09:38:53 · answer #3 · answered by dicovi 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Excessive smoking is always a health risk and you will most certanly get lung cancer from it.
2007-12-06 23:29:37 · answer #4 · answered by NNNIA 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
People that smoke excessively will probably get lung cancer.
2007-12-06 23:14:14 · answer #5 · answered by Neysa 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I am of the opinion that this sentence needs to be changed.
oh, you meant the OTHER sentence.
"This" refers to the first sentence, your question.
"The following" would refer to your sentence about lung cancer and smoking.
It's really hard to discern what you want when you write in incomplete sentences with incorrect capitalization and punctuation.
2007-12-06 23:14:23 · answer #6 · answered by Bobby Jim 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That is already a fact, so to make it an opinion you'd have to add something like, "Smokers should consider quitting because...."
2007-12-06 23:15:53 · answer #7 · answered by Techie Mom 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋