Not bad, for your first one.
2007-12-06 05:15:57
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answered by TCM 3
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I assume you're far from finishing: for now, lots of what I'd call it boring or overwhelming whitespace there...or maybe at least convert it to a "softer" shade? Decorate each page with a photo or two? (Not TOO many! Keep your pages FAST!)
Anyway, for now, improve legibility. Print on the menu needs more contrast with the background. Maybe lightening up the background color would help. And make the print not green, and the background green, or some such. And perhaps the print A BIT bigger. (But remember the color-blind, and don't make it red versus green!)
Good luck! Have fun! Looks good.
2007-12-06 05:20:52
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answered by fjpoblam 7
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for your first one its not bad at all!
although i think having the links and information butt all the way up to the left side of the browser window is a bit unappealing from a design point of view. and also there is way too much white space...i think someone else above me mentioned that also....and the one random floating picture is a bit lonely....add more. and i think the color scheme could use one more color in it (just as an accent)...try pulling a color from his shirt or something!
2007-12-06 07:06:05
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answered by beanunit 4
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Hi.If this is your first website it is very good.i suggest you add more pictures and a coloured background to make the website more attracttive and not boring.
Straight away when I looked at it,it seemed empty but that's probably because you haven't finished.Keep writing more information.Good luck.
2007-12-06 08:48:41
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answered by sweetchick 3
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it good for a first time. I'm not really care for the design.
You can download better templates for free http://www.2createawebsite.com/build/templates.html
http://www.freelayouts.com/websites/html-templates
http://www.templateyes.com/
2007-12-06 07:15:01
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answered by v-1 2
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looks goos so far....im a web designer...i could give you some help and tips....email: zqstudios@yahoo.com
2007-12-06 05:15:19
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answered by ZeeQue Studios 2
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its great! wow!
tell me how!
u could put in some pictures though
2007-12-06 05:14:27
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answered by Gemma J 3
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