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…things I’ve lost in the Bushes;

Urban Park and Recreation Fund,
National Endowment for the Arts,
Clean Water Act,
Land and Water Conservation Fund,
Environmental Protection Agency,
Arctic National Wildlife Refuge,
National Park Service,

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2007-12-06 01:10:39 · 9 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities Poetry

I was on the crew of a deep delving submersible once...

2007-12-06 02:09:32 · update #1

9 answers

...can't you just make a thing easy?

bushes in the noises/character's direction?

2007-12-06 02:43:12 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1 0

The Unclean says it all! And the listings only add more to that 'all'...so, this poem goes over the top with well-spoken, written anger(between the lines!)....he won't be elected again.
It's Hillary that I'm WAY scared of...I just don't trust that woman...and it has nothing to do with women, at all!
I'd like to see a woman in the White House(besides Condoleza Rice, who is excellent), but one who can be trusted and has a way good track record. Hillary DOESN'T!

Elysabeth Faslund...Poemhunter.com

2007-12-06 11:32:23 · answer #2 · answered by Elysabeth 7 · 1 0

Clever. Again, although I don't agree with your political view, I think your use of a "silly" device cleverly done. You did more than make the lines fit the leading letters, you ensured the acrostic "added" to your political commentary.

Again, cleverly done.

2007-12-06 11:13:50 · answer #3 · answered by Kevin S 7 · 1 0

I like this one. The political statement is very accurate. Both Bushes were model Republicans.

2007-12-06 10:23:11 · answer #4 · answered by Orgazmo 2 · 1 0

it can be cute when you're writing poetry for fun or for a friend (for example, using their name) but if you're really looking to delve deep into poetry, i think it is limiting. it can have the negative effect of focusing all your energy on finding words that start with the right letter instead of words that really relay the message of the piece.

2007-12-06 09:21:33 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 3 0

I love it! I shall have to try it. I can't wait. And I'm with you 100% on your views.

2007-12-06 13:00:21 · answer #6 · answered by Marguerite 7 · 1 0

Cool!

2007-12-06 09:53:53 · answer #7 · answered by JacobV 2 · 3 0

It's fine if you're in third grade. ("M is for the Many things she gave me; O is Only that she's growing Old....").

2007-12-06 09:39:04 · answer #8 · answered by Elaine P...is for Poetry 7 · 3 0

You did promise us silly. Thanks. Your friends.

2007-12-06 10:17:50 · answer #9 · answered by Ha'ole Boy! 2 · 2 0

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