okai i've got it takes place in an old hotel, but i'm not sure if i should make it so that it used to be a palace hundreds of years ago or not. anywayz some a girl gets killed, i need help with that i don't know how she dies... a suggestion a frend gave me was that her fiancé killed her, and when she haunts the hotel she's wearing either a wedding dresso r a night gown. and the haunting has something to do with a locket that she was wearing the night she was murdered. and is still at the same place it happened (but no one knows yet)
2007-12-05 15:10:04 · 13 answers · asked by Anonymous in Society & Culture ➔ Mythology & Folklore
make it a mystery death, so people are killed one by one.. that would be cool
2007-12-05 15:13:10 · answer #1 · answered by D3V!N 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
It sounds like a good story. I would suggest a bit of mystery to the story. How about no one knows the killer, and the killer is a man who ruled a place 100 years ago, from a restaurant or something, and he decides to kill her because he has the illusion that she was once his to- be queen. And she roams the hotel with a white night gown with a red stain on it, because that was the spilled poison, she drank, that he killed her with.
2007-12-05 23:22:12 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Maybe someone kidnapped her and brought her to the hotel. Someone tortured her..and she never got to see her family..someone young in there teens.
Or possibly a ghost love story. Sounds good!
Try searching the internet for different storys that strike you interesting and maybe you'll get some good ideas from there.
2007-12-05 23:14:57 · answer #3 · answered by Kendra420 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
ohhhhhhhhhh. i love ghost stories! i like it so far, especially the locket part. Finacee killed her, huh?? too common, maybe a sister?? ok fiancee.wedding dress, all white and with a veil, so it hides her face a little, and when someone sees her, half of her face is gone, because he sliced it off??? too gory?? ok, try this one? he shoved her down the stairs, she broke her neck and she don't know WHO killed her, she just knows she still loves her man and misses him from beyond the grave.
2007-12-05 23:16:01 · answer #4 · answered by Dragonflygirl 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
How about she died of indigestion from her fiance's cooking and she wanders the hotel wearing a gravy stained wedding dress and throwing biscuits at folks.
2007-12-05 23:46:41 · answer #5 · answered by luther 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
sounds good...how about...
her fiance' kills her, but it was by accident on their wedding night...
a jilted lover of his gives him a rose that's been poisoned, intending to kill HIM. Instead he gives it to his new bride who pricks her finger on a thorn, and it kills her...
maybe have the locket be the *key* to the mystery of her death. Have one of the thorns broken off beside it or something...
and she keeps leading him to the locket somehow..but a different way each night?
I think I just fried my brain...
2007-12-05 23:48:27 · answer #6 · answered by tayeloquin2 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The best thing to do is to make it a mystery how she dies and never let the reader know. Just give a lot of clues, and leave the reader wondering.
2007-12-05 23:13:50 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
Id make it more recent, like it happened in the 60s. Then more people can relate.
2007-12-05 23:13:10 · answer #8 · answered by B 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
She could be shoved into the fireplace locket feel into a crack. It would not incinerate the body, but would kill her.
2007-12-05 23:16:32 · answer #9 · answered by doug 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
she should be pushed off the roof during a big party
she was a social outcast so everyone felt guilty and she haunted them and stuff
2007-12-05 23:17:49 · answer #10 · answered by Bell 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋