I'm not saying that all men are thoughtless
they just dont seem to be able to consider us
they seem to prefer drunken nights with their mates
to taking their girlfriend out on hot dates
what would happen if the boot was on the other foot
going out with your mates again? tut tut
men of the world, think about this
before another night out with your mates on the piss
2007-12-05 08:00:11 · 7 answers · asked by Sarah G 1 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
Sorry men, I know some of you out there arent like this (yet) but in my experience and many of my friends too this is what happens. I'm not saying that women are perfect, I am sure we do many things to piss men off. We are just more subtle. Feel free, all men who feel vindicated by this poem to write one in response. Go on, we dare you! (We wont laugh)
2007-12-05 08:38:01 · update #1
No responses yet, maybe men are wimps too. I was hoping for a crimp off a la mighty boosh.
2007-12-05 08:51:22 · update #2
I bet your mythed off with your BF...
2007-12-05 08:06:35 · answer #1 · answered by Clint 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
An inconsiderate piece of rubbish, without any thought for men in general. You have just shovelled us all into the same bag of trash as you've put your own old man. The first line (which you use as a get out) does not even fit into the rest of the poem, if one can call it that.
2007-12-06 18:41:24 · answer #2 · answered by ? 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sounds like you are really ticked at your bf.
I think saying "all men" and continuing the poem addressing all men is unnecessary. Certainly if a man wrote a poem saying "all women are crazy" or something similar, many women would take offense to that.
We overcame sterotyping and sexism a while ago, right? It's wrong no matter who you refer to.
I say insert your bf's name in place of "men" and "they", and "me" instead of "us" then it would be awesome.
2007-12-05 16:21:28 · answer #3 · answered by BillyTheKid 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
'Thoughtless' and 'consider us' don't rhyme properly.
Neither do 'foot' and 'tut tut'.
Also the rhythm of the lines is wrong, try saying the poem over some music to hear the rhythm.
2007-12-06 09:25:19 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Personally i think it is a great poem, so truthful and still being able to rhyme i am sure the men will disagree but i think it is SUPER!!!!!!!:P
2007-12-05 16:06:02 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋
Words of truth there..very nicely written..a pleasure to read.
2007-12-05 16:11:39 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
in my opinion, its nice clear and presice writing but i dont know if i would consider it to be a poem tho
2007-12-05 18:23:31 · answer #7 · answered by snowflakes 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋