Do you like my new Hai'ku? The only problem is, for 10, your answer must be 5-7-5...?

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Moth too close to flame
Cabbages and watercress
Will not morn the loss

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In this one, the contrary line is L-1.
TD

2007-12-05 00:56:23 · 3 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry

the moth does not eat
cabbages and watercress
a white butterfly

2007-12-05 01:07:42 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋

Matters not who eats
Cabbages and watercress
Veggies cannot mourn

2007-12-05 09:16:43 · answer #2 · answered by Elaine P...is for Poetry 7 · 2⤊ 0⤋

Your Haiku is bad,
It's really, really, rubbish,
Give up writing them.

2007-12-05 09:14:04 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋