A story fortold,
A song prewriten,
Yours for now
Mine forsaken.
Bestowed with the gift
Of words mighty and old,
The power to bring together
Those of hate and sword.
Forsaken am I
That you should depart
From the one who loved you most.
What once came in stride,
Now stays out of reach
Like wispy clouds
And the sun's ray.
a rating please, and can you tell me what you think it is about?
2007-12-03 14:00:34 · 5 answers · asked by Andy 3 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
The theme that came immediately to mind is Don Quixote.
No windmills are shown, but it fits the story well.
2007-12-03 15:19:00 · answer #1 · answered by Ef Ervescence 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I do like it, at first read I was left feeling like there was something missing but when I read it a few times it kinda grows and gives up its story. Very nice.
2007-12-03 22:46:18 · answer #2 · answered by PG 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Loneliness after being in love,
The real rating is up to you. I got the idea.
GOD bless us always.
MBA-Boston Univ.
2007-12-03 22:08:58 · answer #3 · answered by May I help You? 6 · 0⤊ 1⤋
I think this is amazing! you have a real talent!
2007-12-03 23:04:40 · answer #4 · answered by ♥↔♥ 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
How can i tell it apart; honesty.
Who's departing?
2007-12-03 22:21:55 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋