I felt pretty crummy today and wanted to try my hand at poetry. I know it sucks, but I want your hones opion on how I can improve it. It really only took me 5 minutes to write so.... Here it goes!!!
Miss Understood
On the outside
A perfect angel
Just waiting for flight
On the inside
A dark soul
Without any light
Miss Understood
That’s what they call me
I wish they could see
The real me
Some days I don’t even know
With which personality I shall go
Hidden secrets and lies
Or my perfectly happy disguise
On the outside
A perfect angel
Just waiting for flight
On the inside
A dark soul
Without any light
Miss Understood
That’s what they call me
I wish they could see
The real me
2007-12-03 13:30:50 · 18 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
I just felt like writing! I know it sucks but whatever! This is like the first poem I have written in a long time!
2007-12-03 13:31:42 · update #1
you hav so much emotion like me i write poems all the time because it makes me feel good inside! I don think you should do anything because this is how you write it and what you are feeling! Its beautiful and it brought tears to me!
2007-12-03 13:35:45 · answer #1 · answered by Abby 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I'm not a contact .......but i thought that was really good......i understand exactly what ur going through cuz i feel the same way and don't know how to handle it
2007-12-03 13:38:52 · answer #2 · answered by momma 2 Sydney 9-8-09 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Im not one of your contacts but this poem is really really good bro
2007-12-03 13:37:07 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's really not bad at all. I like it. Keep writing. Your amazing!
2007-12-03 14:27:19 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Awwwwww! I think its really good, Well done Babez xx
2007-12-05 23:23:08 · answer #5 · answered by catherrrrrrrine;xo 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Not one of your contacts, but that was really good.
2007-12-03 13:38:38 · answer #6 · answered by Memories of Another World. 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it, thats really good.
2007-12-03 13:36:47 · answer #7 · answered by Beautiful Disaster 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
actually sounds pretty much how i feel all the time.
2007-12-03 13:33:48 · answer #8 · answered by Simone L 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Hehh.
I'm not your contact but it rocked.
Honestly.
You're very creative.!
2007-12-03 13:34:16 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
wow! i really like it! its really good! thats exactly how i feel too
2007-12-04 09:11:22 · answer #10 · answered by Pete Wentz 4ever! 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋