We are happy
Pretending to be happy...when we're not
Speaking in a gay tone when all we wanna do is sigh
Holding up that high pitch...and giggling alot
"How can they not see?
How can they not feel?
Our world's crashing down inside!"
writing nonsense and more stupid phrases
just so they won't think we're a not a nutcase
Why the f#&k do we have to care
for what these pricks have to say?
It's just too unbearable to play a role
of a part that does not belong to you...
Sooner or later...you ask yourself...
Is it just me or am I going crazy? !
2007-12-03 13:13:04 · 10 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
Good poem . . . good feeling, good emotional projection.
Only comment would be to break up the lines into sets of two-three lines with full ideas enclosed in five lines.
Keep up the good work . . . but remember structure.
2007-12-10 21:16:31 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
I'm So Glad That You're Happy, IgnoranceGoddess, By The Way, Are You Buzzed On Brandy When Creating This Beautiful Poems, Lol?
2007-12-04 23:53:06 · answer #2 · answered by ? 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Happiness is for stupid people. No way am I giving up the ability to read a book longer than a hundred pages long, or a knowledge of the world around me, just so I can can get a kick out of Xfactor and Ipods or whatever. Whats the occasional bit of depression next to the ability to think?
2007-12-03 22:31:23 · answer #3 · answered by miserable old git 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Now I like this one, paints a great picture in my head, I get what you're feeling. Don't be afraid of the darkness, life is not all about the light.
2007-12-03 21:45:52 · answer #4 · answered by PG 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
u seem really sad, but noone is sad just to be sad. so what is the reason????? there has 2 be a particular person or incident that keeps u sad, n u need 2 shake that off cuz life can be soooo great and fun
2007-12-03 21:23:50 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
What you say in this poem, is absolutely true! People have their own problems and aren't all that interested in ours--except here, of course, in this forum.
2007-12-04 05:42:18 · answer #6 · answered by Elaine P...is for Poetry 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
i think you seems like you so bored and you feel so empty with your life. i think you should get some fun with your frend or family and you also can depress you emotion trough your song or poem maybe anything else.
2007-12-03 21:20:18 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
There the crazy ones. Your only playing on. ERRRROOF!
2007-12-03 22:44:27 · answer #8 · answered by ? 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
we all put on the happy face so others can't really see
what we are feeling.
2007-12-03 22:23:16 · answer #9 · answered by Mary S 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
we all pretend to be happy at some point when we,re not ..
2007-12-04 08:04:01 · answer #10 · answered by Snuggles 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋