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Question

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Hamlet had ending that was appropriate for the genre of tragedy. Death of Hamlet was even more effective because Hamlet was not a villain instead he was all but bad. On the other hand, Macbeth’ death actually helped the play turn in to the happy ending. Macbeth is sure it falls in to the category of the tragedy because of so many deaths were presented in the play, but it lacks the effectiveness and impact on the audience to believe that the play is tragic.

Answer 1

Hamlet had an ending that was appropriate for the genre of tragedy. The death of Hamlet was more effective for the fact that Hamlet was not a villain; he was not all bad. On the other hand, Macbeth's death actually led to the play's happy ending. Macbeth falls into the category of the tragedy because so many deaths were presented in the play; however, it lacks the ability to convince the audience that the play is tragic.

Answer 2

Hamlet had an ending... The death of Hamlet......he was anything but bad. Macbeth's death actually helped give the play a happy ending. Macbeth certainly falls into the category of tragedy because so many deaths occurred in the play, but it lacks the effectiveness and impact to make the audience believe that the play is tragic. Hope this helps

Answer 3

you need to use the two term, "actor" or "actress", as long as you're conscious of this: "The observe actor refers to a individual who acts even with gender, on an identical time as actress refers specially to a girl individual who acts; for this reason a woman could properly be pronounced by using the two term. The Oxford English Dictionary states that initially "actor" became into used for the two sexes. As actress is a specially female observe, some communities assert that the observe is sexist. Gender-independent utilization of actor has re-emerged in present day English,[4][5] exceptionally whilst concerning woman and male performers mutually, yet actress continues to be the elementary term utilized in significant appearing awards given to woman recipients and is elementary frequently utilization."