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All Puppet's on Satan's String's
A policeman's gun strapped to his side,
hoping to find a reason to use it.
A teacher mixes truth with lies,
children are forced to believe.
Doctor's, Lawyer's and garbage collector's alike.
Your job just bores you,you know it.
But like a nymphomaniac whose never satisfied,
still you keep trying, til it gets you nowhere.
Psychology, always trying to correct me.
I had it right the first time.
The poeple in charge just shove me aside.
"What are you doing here?!!"
God's House has been turned into a circus.
Still they cry.
Coffee or Cocaine they're both the same.
You've got no one but yourself to blame.

2007-12-03 02:06:39 · 8 answers · asked by catsclaw 6 in Arts & Humanities Poetry

8 answers

I totally get it! BRAVO!

2007-12-03 05:16:40 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1 0

You poetry, in this critic's view
Has a well-chosen title, but I gotta tell you
I could have done without the god and satan crap
But you like many have fallen into that superstitious trap
You have no clue how to use an apostrophe
Homonyms also elude you, I see
May I suggest to have it right the first time
You must learn proper English and then try to rhyme
But overall I am not surprised
Because an even more worse poem can be visualized
I've read them here, never fear
Compared to some you win first prize.

2007-12-03 13:27:50 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

Did you write this? If not, then thank goodness. Seems like something I would write in the middle of the night as tears spill down like black puddles in the melting white snow. Very sick, indeed.

2007-12-03 10:38:36 · answer #3 · answered by Anthony C 4 · 2 0

If it's a truly awful poem you seek,
one to make you moan and weep,
Friend, this verse I offer you;
one that's lacking through and through.

2007-12-03 10:12:45 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 1 0

That's nice. Now put down the knife and step away from the ledge...that's it, nice and slow. Good boy...the nice men are here to help you.

2007-12-03 10:18:13 · answer #5 · answered by Bam Bam Obama 3 · 1 0

I'm only here for the nymphomania and cocaine.

2007-12-03 15:07:33 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 1 0

Gawd! It's me at 17...

2007-12-03 13:15:04 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 1 0

it's not all that bad l kind of like it, it has a lot to say.

2007-12-03 10:38:08 · answer #8 · answered by nevets 1 · 0 0

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