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Princess
Soup can telephone,
Flashlight semaphore,
Sawmill whisper, tap on the window,
Blinds parted, then pulled,
Golden curls on backlit pink curtains,
She cocks her head,
“What strange bird is this at my window?”
Come into the night with me.
Come to my castle, high up a tree!
Old window creaks,
Gently slides open,
Nightshirt rustles, vibrates my soul,
Fingers touch, then clasp,
A muffled giggle, swinging,
Those blue eyes,
What sort of cat has climbed my tree?
“I’m come to the night, called by you.”
“I’m here to be queen, King Brian Baru.”
Moonlight shadows,
Gentle warm breezes,
Hands exploring, lips elastic stroke,
Pulses racing, hearts embracing,
Leaves shaking, nocturnal,
Branches flexing,
Oak tree rendezvous, midnight entwined,
“How will we get down from this parapet?”
How can I ever forget such a silhouette?
*****
2007-12-03 01:48:40 · 9 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
We are on some kind of thing, Marg, I almost rolled the van this morning. I got all squirrely...when I got back on the hard...I thought "Don't drive like Marg!"
2007-12-03 03:56:52 · update #1
I really liked it..You always come up with something original ' and nice'and you are a true poet.,
2007-12-03 02:43:37 · answer #1 · answered by Cami lives 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
It's a shame that most people who have answered aren't as understanding of poetry, to give you a more detailed comment.
I thought it was a very sweet and fun poem about a girl and a boy using a soup-can telephone.
( I hope I got the meaning of it right there )
:)
2007-12-03 02:07:25 · answer #2 · answered by ♆Şрhĩņxy - Lost In Time. 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Sweet story poem of two lovers meeting secretly at midnight. (A cell phone might have worked better than the soup can--it could have been set to chirp like a bird). Lol!!
2007-12-03 02:47:22 · answer #3 · answered by Elaine P...is for Poetry 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Would you believe yesterday I was thinking of poem about soup can walkie talkies?!! Thank you for freaking me out this morning.
The poem is great. I love the innocent youth.
2007-12-03 03:48:26 · answer #4 · answered by Marguerite 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I like this one. It is alot better than the one you got a D on. This one makes a little more sense. It's very good.
2007-12-03 01:54:50 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
I like it but break a leg is the best
2007-12-03 01:51:56 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋
Geez...now i really feel like a Princess! I like it very much. Thanks daddy TD... =)
2007-12-03 02:07:34 · answer #7 · answered by Dark Dickinsonian 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
YEAH! did you write that? it's awesome!
2007-12-03 01:52:08 · answer #8 · answered by V L 3 · 2⤊ 0⤋
No I don't like it; better not quit your dayjob.
2007-12-03 01:51:46 · answer #9 · answered by Simba 2 · 1⤊ 2⤋