No syllable pattern that I could count...1-2-6-3-4-9-2-6-4-3...
Moth to the flame, is a kind of things mothers do, and keep you warm like a sweater(love) Sigmund had his problems, probably with the solutions of cocaine...but he did go into the human perceptions of dragons and what they meant(mentally, dreams). The rest is pretty simple to understand.
You were free-associating when you did this...at least partly. And that's a way good thing for writers to do!
Elysabeth Faslund...Poemhunter.com
2007-12-03 02:18:47
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answered by Elysabeth 7
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I got a D on the Rorschach Test
Moth,
No…Mom?
Maybe Mohair Sweater?
Dragons?
No, they’re not real
Must be a escalator, Sigmund
An Urn?
No, vase, or is it vauze?
It’s not a frog?
I know that…
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hahaha. funny
2007-12-03 09:43:53
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answered by Anonymous
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I think you haven't gotten many great comments because nobody knows what the Rorschach Test is.
I didn't either, until I looked it up and found out it's The Inkblot test.
I think it's a very funny poem to do with taking an inkblot test and your conversation with Sigmund Freud about it.
:)
2007-12-03 09:50:42
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answered by ♆Şрhĩņxy - Lost In Time. 7
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Thank heavens I never had to take a Rorschach Test! Of course, you can't get an A or a D on it, as well you know. It's very funny, if not all that poetic. (BTW, writing IS "a real job").
2007-12-03 10:32:44
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answered by Elaine P...is for Poetry 7
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I actually do like it.
This type of poem is called a sparse.
I especially like the part about vauze.
For the record, poetry does not have to make sense. All it has to do is make you think or feel something.
2007-12-03 09:51:13
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answered by Cold Hard Fact 6
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It sounds like a lost confused sentence. Poems dont have to rhyme, but yours has lost the plot completely.
2007-12-03 09:46:32
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answered by keefbeef 3
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Beatiful.
2007-12-03 09:42:28
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answered by Liza. 2
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LOL - this is very funny. I am still chuckling ... I love vauze!
2007-12-03 11:55:47
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answered by Marguerite 7
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makes no sense.
2007-12-03 09:43:23
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answered by karibear 1
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wow!
2007-12-03 13:28:28
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answered by smizziana 2
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