Driving
Out on the road
watching cars go by
some drive fast
while others go slow
just where they're going,
nobody knows.
They just keep driving
wherever they go,
polluting the air,
that's all I know.
Some go fast,
while others go slow.
Sometimes I drive,
I drive real slow.
Those who drive fast,
they let me know,
by giving me the finger
'cause I'm driving to slow.
Where we're all going,
still I don't know.
I'll try and be happy
wherever I go.
Those who drive angry,
let everyone know,
by giving the finger
wherever they go.
"Why do they hurry?"
I just don't know.
They just seem so angry,
wherever they go.
2007-12-03 00:48:35 · 3 answers · asked by catsclaw 6 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
this was one of the first poems I ever wrote just wanted to know what everyone thinks of it.l'm reading through some of my old poems
2007-12-03 01:04:30 · update #1
that's really funny l like it, sounds like me when l'm driving
2007-12-04 20:20:05 · answer #1 · answered by nevets 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It should be " 'cause I'm driving too slow", Otherwise, OK.
2007-12-03 08:55:21 · answer #2 · answered by correrafan 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Good. Just it's too simple, but otherwise ok...
2007-12-03 09:31:26 · answer #3 · answered by Analyst 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋