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" Now I'm going to tell you about the narrator's character traits "

im trying to conclude a paragraph to start a next paragraph in an essay.

2007-12-02 16:45:55 · 7 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference Homework Help

7 answers

The narrator possessed three noteworthy character traits: blah, bleh, and bluh.

2007-12-02 17:04:21 · answer #1 · answered by blueskies 7 · 0 0

Think about transitions when writing between paragraphs. Your concluding sentence should tie the idea of the previous paragraph to the idea of the next paragraph. It looks like you already tried to tie it to the next paragraph. Try some variation of:

"Although _____________________, examining the character traits of the narrator is another important topic that will be examined."

In the blank, try to fill it in with a phrase that basically summarizes the point of your previous paragraph. Good luck!

2007-12-03 00:52:11 · answer #2 · answered by Enderse 1 · 1 0

Just dont say that at the end of the paragraph. Just begin a new paragraph with:
The narrator's character traits are.....
or something like that.

2007-12-03 00:50:50 · answer #3 · answered by AB 3 · 0 0

First of all When starting new paragraph with new topic, you should not start with the sentence like, I would like to talk about, my paragraph is about, e.t.c instead go directly to the topic, or give little introduction then go to main point. in this paragraph this is how I would rephrase it.
The narrator's character traits...................
It is obvious that the narrator's character............
In conclusion the narrator's character traits......

2007-12-03 01:00:48 · answer #4 · answered by Xwerty 2 · 0 0

Get rid of it altogether.

You don't introduce the idea of the next paragraph in the previous paragraph. Each paragraph should concentrate on a single idea.

Start the next paragraph with a topic sentence that talks about character traits.

2007-12-03 00:50:38 · answer #5 · answered by don_sv_az 7 · 2 0

Never write such things as:

I'm going to tell you.....
In my opinion.....
I believe.......

The implication is already there that you are writing, or that it's your opinion, etc.; there is no need to state that.

The narrator's character traits are.....
These are character traits that surround the narrator......
The narrator has these character traits......

2007-12-03 01:01:23 · answer #6 · answered by slobberknocker_usa 7 · 0 0

It sounds very good to me, what is wrong? You can't think of the next sentence or what? Why do you want to rephrase this sentence?

2007-12-03 00:50:08 · answer #7 · answered by Beau 6 · 0 1

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