Can you help me edit this. I would like to know if there is anything you think needs to be changed-taken off.?

Question

OBJECTIVE:

A position as a general office clerk for a corporation where I may use all the skills acquired through my career, educational training, and volunteering.

SKILLS PROFILE:

Ability to operate a cash register
Knowledge of and experience computers
Good filing and organizational skills
Experience in handling confidential paperwork
Ability to take accurate phone messages and deliver messages promptly
Good customer-service background
Knowledge and experience in accounting
Knowledge and experience in auto part's
.Knowledge and experience in auto matinee

EMPLOYMENT HISTORY:

Sales 2007-2007
Jiffy Lube, north east Philadelphia., pa
I would work with customers to inshore that
the customer know what was done to there car and
went over the paper work.

Wait staff and host 2006-2006
Denny's, Elkton, MD
. Server food and help in seating the tables.

Cook
Speedy Oak, Conowingo, MD
Prepared Food
Prep cooked on weekends

Cashier 2003-200

Cecil Auto Repair, Cecilton, MD
Accounting
Assistant Manager on weekends
Customer service and sales
Responsible for accurate tracking and receiving of auto parts
Responsible for accurate customer reports
Responsible for filing of customer reports and claims

Cook/Wait staff 2002-2003
Archway Inn, Crystal Beach, MD
Served restaurant patrons and assisted at the cash register
Prepared food
Hostess/answer phones
Night time clean up

EDUCATION:

General Studies 2001-2003
Bohemia Manor High School, Chesapeake City, MD
Basic/Intermediate Keyboarding

General Studies 2004-2005
Rising Sun High School, North East, MD
Microsoft Word, Excel, Power Point, and
Microsoft office 2000.

GED studies 2005-2005
Cecil community collage
Elkt

Answer 1

Basically looks good. Just a couple things:

Under SKILLS PROFILE
2nd line - experience WITH computers
next to last line - no apostrophe in parts
last line - auto matinee? what's that?

EMPLOYMENT HISTORY
Jiffy Lube - capitalize PA, to ensure not inshore, knew not know, their car not there car

Denny's - Served food not server food

Cashier - end year isn't complete just says 200

EDUCATION
GED studies – caps on Community College and spelling of College, and next line isn’t finished

Answer 2

OBJECTIVE:

A position in the General Office Clerk field where I can use my skills acquired through my career, educational training, and volunteering.

SKILLS PROFILE:

Ability to operate a cash register
Knowledge of and experience in computers
Good filing and organizational skills
Experience in handling confidential paperwork
Ability to take accurate phone messages and deliver messages promptly
Good customer service background
Knowledge and experience in accounting
Knowledge and experience in auto part's
Knowledge and experience in auto matinee

EMPLOYMENT HISTORY:

Sales 2007-2007
Jiffy Lube, north east Philadelphia., pa
I would work with customers to insure that
the customers know what was done to their cars and
went over the paper work. Called customers and advised them that there vehicle was ready for pick up.

Wait staff and host 2006-2006
Denny's, Elkton, MD
. Served food and help in seating the tables.

Cook
Speedy Oak, Conowingo, MD
Prepared Food
Prep cooked on weekends