i do,its rained most of the past month and there is so much to catch up on in+out of the house.
2007-12-02 10:09:18 · 10 answers · asked by shrebee 7 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
Girl, I know exactly what you mean and the worse part is running around in circles and getting absolutely nothing accomplished. That is so frustrating and tiring. I do this on sunny days, rainy days, snowy days..............dog, just about everyday. lol
2007-12-02 10:36:57 · answer #1 · answered by ? 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I agree with the others- for your age the poetry is very good. If your looking to improve, or share with others, you could talk to an English or creative writing teacher at school - i did and worked it into my schedule to guest in our schools creative writing class, it is a good experience. As for the critique- Not all poetry is meant to flow smoothly - i have read several that are better mixed up - but that is something you could look into some, i don't mean rewrite the poem, but as your reading through them, just make little changes so the roll off yourtonguee better, like youdon'tt feel the sharp edges. If your looking to be the best you could be, i think the best way to go is to choose your favorite format of poetry, and try to stick with that. Its been a few years for me, but since i started writing Monchielle poetry, and trying to put all of my poetry into that form, my poetry is much better then it was then. Something you might want to try- perhaps try a few poems without much of a rhyme scheme? You may discover that your poetry is better in a free verse type. Anyways, keep it up =p
2016-05-27 07:17:49 · answer #2 · answered by ? 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yeaaaa,,,,& Todays one of those days We've nasty winter weather Snow rain sleet Footballs on-- my team is losing running around in circles It'll definetly be an early night .......
2007-12-02 10:18:18 · answer #3 · answered by Andrew M 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Yes.
Except most days I feel like I'm running around inside a square.
2007-12-02 11:59:38 · answer #4 · answered by Coltsfan 2 · 2⤊ 0⤋
I am stuck on this mouse pad - so I 'll say YES.
Even worse on the day when I am chasing my tail all the time.
Cheese to you!
2007-12-02 12:08:21 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Thats most days for me
2007-12-02 10:11:56 · answer #6 · answered by jrsygrl 7 · 2⤊ 0⤋
On here I'm in circles all the time DAILY.. looking for my INVISIBLE FRIENDS on here.. that's mostly Invisible & it makes me think they sure ARE IMAGINARY!! lol xx
2007-12-02 11:07:50 · answer #7 · answered by ausblue 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
yea
2007-12-02 10:12:09 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
yeap to me it happens everyday!!
2007-12-02 10:13:42 · answer #9 · answered by Malaysia 5 · 2⤊ 0⤋
yep. very much so.
2007-12-02 10:13:28 · answer #10 · answered by nybabyblu 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋