Okay so i am writing a poem for my mom and dad for xmas ...and here is the ending part of it ...but i don't know what to put after "so lets get together and what ??????" Please help ...thanks !
2007-12-02
05:17:10
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➔ Holidays
➔ Christmas
Flurries are falling, Sidewalks are white
bells are jingling, christmas is tonight
I smile, because we are all together
happily, merrily, it couldn't be any better
Its the most wonderful time of the year
being with family and having good cheer
I can't wait till next year
so lets all get together ......?????????????? <<<
Keep the rhyme scheme the same from the first to the second stanza. Basically you have
A
A
B
B
So in the second one, change that "I can't wait til next year" b/c it is way shorter than the other lines and messes up your rhyme. Then your last "lets all get together" can rhyme with something different. Consider something about why you love being with the family or the love you have for each other.
2007-12-02 05:26:48 · answer #1 · answered by phantom_of_valkyrie 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think that part of the problem is that in the first stanza, you have rhymed the first two lines and the second two lines. In the second stanza, so far, all the lines rhyme. So, I have rewritten your last two lines. If you like it, great, if not, no hurt feelings.
Its the most wonderful time of the year
Being with family and having good cheer
Can't think of a place I'd rather be
Because you mean the world to me
2007-12-02 05:33:59 · answer #2 · answered by diamondldy4 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
And enjoy merry weather??
2007-12-02 05:24:43 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
and crack open a beer?
spread some good cheer?
2007-12-02 05:27:17 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
''without any fear'' LOL
or
''because THEE time is here''
or ''because that special time is here''
2007-12-02 05:26:03 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
..and feed the reindeer?
2007-12-02 05:26:39 · answer #6 · answered by Kelsey G 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
and cheer!
2007-12-02 05:25:34 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋