O
to see a Fire
Pit)
Falling embers from the sky
Dancing
Moving
FLoating
Buring in my Ey)e
Need to get warm) heat
Flowing through my Sk)jn the heat
Roasting hotdogs, and drinking coco
Warm my body
My fireplace
2007-12-01 13:50:54 · 3 answers · asked by Poet master 1 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
Put a little more time into it honey. I think you can make it better.
I feel you though, it's FREEZING here in Nor Cal.
2007-12-01 14:09:19 · answer #1 · answered by Rina 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
It's cold in New Hampshire, too. I think it's about 15 degrees here.
edit: And I believe you are just telling us that your bored because your poem just ain't that good.
2007-12-01 13:53:48 · answer #2 · answered by Chara Pointshot 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
How about Smores they are so good and make you feel like kid again, graham crackers,marsh mellows,Hershey chocolates as melt and slide down your throat the make you smile!
2007-12-01 14:10:53 · answer #3 · answered by ? 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋