The Terza Rima
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Go! Go! Go!
Wheels on the ground turning round and around,
On boards, on trikes and on red motor bikes,
Take us to places we’d never have found,
Better than sitting or taking a hike,
The sun, the rain and the wind tantalize,
Walking and riding are quite unalike,
Streets sign and curves wind, they do hypnotize,
A map can not show where a road does not go,
The trip is unplanned, to a stop realized.
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2007-12-01 07:57:59 · 5 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
Yes, Dante, Frost, St Prosper, all stroking right now.
2007-12-01 09:16:13 · answer #1 · answered by Orgazmo 2 · 3⤊ 0⤋
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2016-10-18 12:28:17 · answer #2 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yeah, the rhythm's a little lumpy in places--but let it be! let it be! You have a pretty good poem here, more-or-less on form; where's the real problem?
I like it, a lot, for bringing to the fore that 'sense of road' that riding gives--and that walking does not. That's 'true poetic sense,' and a very welcome change from 'you rat bastard, why don't you love me like I love you?' poetry.
2007-12-01 08:42:05 · answer #3 · answered by skumpfsklub 6 · 3⤊ 1⤋
Wobbly iambs can be painful, I am really sorry for you.
2007-12-01 08:18:33 · answer #4 · answered by Lady Annabella-VInylist 7 · 3⤊ 0⤋
Dante would have a heart attack!!
2007-12-01 09:10:45 · answer #5 · answered by Elaine P...is for Poetry 7 · 3⤊ 0⤋