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Critique
That’s…not…art!
It does not make my head hurt
It doesn’t make me do the ding dong dance
That’s…not…poetry
It failed to make me jump the ledge
There is no fun inside of this for me
No guns, no knives nor bigotry
That’s…not…painting
There’s no fire, there’s no evil, there’s no hating
You call this work of yours a triumph
This silly bit of hope and guidance…
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2007-12-01 07:49:58 · 4 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
I like your funny poems. Good for the good mood.
2007-12-01 08:09:30 · answer #1 · answered by Lady Annabella-VInylist 7 · 3⤊ 0⤋
Exactly! If it doesn't arouse passion and pain in body and mind, it's not worth anything at all. The ending says it all: leave the hope and guidance to the classroom and to the politicians on the campaign trail. Art is about universal themes that touch us that make us feel--no matter if it's pain or joy.
2007-12-01 17:19:39 · answer #2 · answered by Elaine P...is for Poetry 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Yes! I like this...because, very simply...they are TRUE! Your words correctly fit the messages you are trying to get across.
And, a point I try to make people believe is...when you separate...words...with dots...you make the reader sit up and wait for the rest...of what they're...going to...read! Excellent!
Elysabeth Faslund...Poemhunter.com
2007-12-01 16:23:47 · answer #3 · answered by Elysabeth 7 · 3⤊ 0⤋
Yes. I do like this.
2007-12-01 17:13:16 · answer #4 · answered by Orgazmo 2 · 2⤊ 0⤋