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my cat, my flower, my rose
from her soft white fur to her cold pink nose
her, on my bed, in the middle of the night
when I am upset she makes everything right
she leaps she bounces
and at three AM she pounces
she is is always ready to play
and when she poops on my bed I love her anyway
2007-12-01 04:26:49 · 4 answers · asked by kittenlova 3 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
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I wrote it a few days ago off the top of my head. I do have more serious poems though...
http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;_ylt=AmtU6bNjoy734nLDWdRzvp3ty6IX;_ylv=3?qid=20071129172050AAGWro3
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2007-12-01 04:35:57 · update #1
but she pounces on my feet under the cover at 3am....
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2007-12-01 08:36:44 · update #2
Amusing, but I'd suggest litter-box training.
(For the cat, of course.)
8^)
2007-12-01 04:35:37 · answer #1 · answered by Samwise 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Started off good and got a little weird at the end. Good for a comical poem, but most poetry readers tend to want something more serious. The potential is definitely there, though.
2007-12-01 12:34:11 · answer #2 · answered by mydoghasfleas5678 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
What you're looking for is how your pet is your best friend. When she plays, when she lies on your bed, even when she poops!, she's a pal and a companion. What you need to change, however is "three AM" to "three-o'-clock", to give it a more innocent look.
Good poem anyways! A-
2007-12-01 14:25:02 · answer #3 · answered by romero08 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That's cute I like it!
2007-12-01 12:32:06 · answer #4 · answered by #1 Raider Fan 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋