I'm writing this romantic story as a final for one of my classes. The heroine was once so hurt by the world that she ran as fast as she could into hiding and baracaided herself in to keep herself safe from being found, from being hurt. And the man she loves is trying his best to get to her. But he can't. Both are sick in love and are about to let it all go. Losing this love forever. She'll have a chance to cautiously come out of hiding for just a few moments, say sometime today. Like, maybe 3pm. What should she do?? She doesn't know exactly where he is. And is so timid that she'll run and hide again at the first signal he's not there. Should they meet somewhere?? And if so, where?? Or is there another ending that sounds even better?? Please help. This paper is due very soon, and I really want a good grade....
2007-12-01 03:42:15 · 16 answers · asked by ~ luv sis 6 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
Here's how it should end:
"And they lived happily ever after. The end."
2007-12-01 03:51:39 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
She can creep down to the river to reminisce
about her lost loved. While staring into the river hoping for a release from some of her heartache. when from over her should his face appears reflected in the water. She turns and he is not there. But wait upon the hill top could that be her love?
2007-12-01 03:51:06 · answer #2 · answered by Southern Comfort 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I don't have a response to the actual question hun, I just wanted to respond to the disheartening reviews by the others
I love writing romance stories and to say they are "cheesy" or "cliche" is an extremely uneducated and illiterate response
Writers are the most special people and have the most amazing ideas, keep writing
2007-12-01 03:50:58 · answer #3 · answered by Blank 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
If she`s in hiding, how do you expect to have him find her? Try having him stumble onto a clue as to her whereabouts..He could be just reaching her when she comes out of hiding, and they can meet, kiss, and go off into the sunset. It`s the best I could do extemporaneously Good luck with your story.
2007-12-01 03:50:46 · answer #4 · answered by jms043 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sup dude, they should be destined to be drawn to a similar object they both hod dear to their hearts and end up at the same place at the same time and then call it "Destiny" or something. Then they go back to her place and make plans for marrage and live with each other never to be seen again. When I said her place, I mean wherever she was at hiding out dude. Not the other kind of her place incase that sounded wrong. Your welcome.
2007-12-01 03:50:03 · answer #5 · answered by Sweet & Low 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Because life after marriage is hell and authors want to write love story not horror story.
2016-04-07 01:43:05 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
When she come out of hiding, close her eyes, think of that man she ever love. And ask her heart where he is. Then she will find him. After she close her eyes and ask her heart where the man she loves, her legs will taking her to the place that she will never forget. The place that they first met.
2007-12-01 03:53:29 · answer #7 · answered by Sheil 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Try picturing yourself as the heroine. What would u do if u were her? Then picture wht would the hero do? What do u want him to do, in real life? I always picture myself in the main character's shoes then write the story. It's always easy to reflect on tht part..so all the best. ask ur friends about their opinion on it... whether they like it or hate it. hmm this are the stuff i do.
This is my story.
http://www.writers-dilemma.blogspot.com/
2007-12-01 03:54:25 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I'm not very good with stories but don't let the other girl (first answer) tell you it was bad. I thought it had a lot of merit to it and just go with your imagination and your gut and you will find the ending your looking for.
Good Luck
2007-12-01 03:48:58 · answer #9 · answered by BILL 7 · 2⤊ 1⤋
Crush him dont end it like all the others but have him find her dead in her hiding spot and be forever regretfull of not being there for her.
2007-12-01 03:50:08 · answer #10 · answered by ru2tipsy2c 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
First of all, I disagree with the 1st answerer. I think the story sounds awesome...I would make it so that she wondered around, saw the man she loves, and he doesn't recognize her. Then she figures out that she's been in that tree really for years. =)
2007-12-01 03:49:32 · answer #11 · answered by mAdDi 2 · 1⤊ 1⤋