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Richard
Enger-lish is hard, you see
Words, segments, and sentence-ease
It's harder still,
On beer and pills,
And reefer makes it worse
I suggest you put these down,
Before you work on complex verse
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2007-12-01 02:10:03 · 10 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
LOL - I can relate.
2007-12-01 03:41:53 · answer #1 · answered by Marguerite 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Seems awfully familiar to this one
Dick
Dick gets hard, you see
Women, porn, and pressure-ease
It's not so hard despite my will,
On beer and pill,
And reefer makes it worse
I suggest you put these down,
Before you date a wet nurse
2007-12-01 02:19:50 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 3⤊ 0⤋
I really like it. I like that you have meaning in there with true pronounciations of Richard's - it's very concise and it says a lot. Nice work.
2007-12-01 02:19:00 · answer #3 · answered by Las Julius 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I think it is good...it is witty, satirical, and says what it has to say in a few, very choice lines and words. I do not take this one lightly at all! Good work!
Elysabeth Faslund...Poemhunter.com
2007-12-01 02:47:42 · answer #4 · answered by Elysabeth 7 · 2⤊ 0⤋
I am afraid for Zahid to learn too much of our language. Until this, that is. You are great at your specialway of words transcending language!
2016-04-07 01:37:14 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very funny again. By the way, have you ever read Wendy Cope:
The Uncertainty of the Poet
I am a poet.
I am very fond of bananas.
I am bananas.
I am very fond of a poet.
I am a poet of bananas.
I am very fond.
A fond poet of 'I am, I am'-
Very bananas.
Fond of 'Am I bananas?
Am I?'-a very poet.
Bananas of a poet!
Am I fond? Am I very?
Poet bananas! I am.
I am fond of a 'very.'
I am of very fond bananas.
Am I a poet?
2007-12-01 05:01:12 · answer #6 · answered by Lady Annabella-VInylist 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wow...What a revolutionary concept! A poem from me to me... =)
2007-12-01 02:23:29 · answer #7 · answered by Dark Dickinsonian 4 · 2⤊ 0⤋
It's ok. I guess I'd like it if it was a bit longer.
2007-12-01 02:18:46 · answer #8 · answered by Eleven 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Its fair.
2007-12-01 02:13:36 · answer #9 · answered by GreenGasp 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
*** it's my rate
2007-12-01 02:14:55 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋