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Dave
Hey Friend
Where you been'
Geez, your hair's a mess
Hey Kid
Looks like you skid
Smack dab on your face
Get up son
You better run
Here comes the frikkin cops!
*****
2007-12-01 02:08:28 · 3 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
Another good one to read aloud, and a real story in just a few words. Good job.
2007-12-01 04:53:56 · answer #1 · answered by Lady Annabella-VInylist 7 · 2⤊ 0⤋
This one is witty, and WAY funny...I'd go so far as to say you wrote this, not as a serious poem, but playing around...as we all do. I call it 'toss-off' poetry...nothing wrong with that, some very good ideas come from just 'fooling around'.
Elysabeth Faslund...Poemhunter.com
2007-12-01 02:44:58 · answer #2 · answered by Elysabeth 7 · 2⤊ 0⤋
This is one of the things i adore about you; you can do all styles and subjects in poetry,,,,Thanks
2007-12-01 03:04:15 · answer #3 · answered by Cami lives 6 · 2⤊ 0⤋