these days get better
everyday that im with you
and every night its so hard
to fall asleep, thinkin of you
i cant explain whats happening
its like reality is better than my dreams
and its coming so fast that i can
barely imagine what its like on the other side
(prechorus)
now i know its hard to stop
thinking about you (thinking about you)
now i know its hard to start
moving forward again
these better days wont help me
find myself, cuz im lost not bein
who im supposed to be
and change is important but what happens
when youre not perfect?
(chorus)
you put your arms around me
left in the dark i hold on
to whats left of us
dreams of uncertainty
dreams of my love i hold on to
and wont let go
These words wont make it better
tonight (these words will not hurt either) x2
and i live for this
and laugh to take what should be mine
and this love wont hold on
wont hold on
cant hold onnnnnn
wont hold onn
but ill hold on for you
prechorus
chorus
2007-12-01 01:16:23 · 18 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music ➔ Lyrics
I think they're great! Seems like you have a really good talent and a way with words. Do you write only or do you use music also? I'd try to get someone to read this or hear it if you have music with it. You never know..great things could happen. I don't know where you would start to do something like this but I'm sure if you ask around someone will be able to tell you. You should be proud of yourself for having this talent..keep up the good work!
2007-12-01 01:25:57 · answer #1 · answered by Lucy*JakeFanClubFounder* 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wow! You wrote this? I especialy like the, "its like reality is better than my dreams" part and the whole,
"these better days wont help me
find myself, cuz im lost not bein
who im supposed to be
and change is important but what happens
when youre not perfect?" part.
Nice work.
2007-12-01 01:25:09 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Good structure. You seem to have a grasp on this.
You tend to let the rhyme scheme loose in places, and in the future strive to put more alliteration and metaphor into the simple words you used to give your audience more to think about. But no complaints for an early writer.
2013-11-02 12:56:49 · answer #3 · answered by Your Uncle Dodge! 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wow. Those lyrics are amazing! 9.9!! If you had a tune to go with that - oh my gosh =] PS If you wrote those lyrics about yourself - I know exactly how you feel.
2016-05-27 02:26:20 · answer #4 · answered by delores 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
great but dont forget the importance of copyrighting my lyrically inclined possum someone will bite your words
2007-12-01 01:22:41 · answer #5 · answered by emma_undoo 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
There Good.
2007-12-01 01:19:50 · answer #6 · answered by Ollie 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
omg!! that is so kewlio!! i luv writing songs and i rock at it!! u do too! u should so become a song writer!!
2007-12-01 01:19:12 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Record it.....
Sounds pretty good...
Problem is, you posted it here, so someone will probably steal it....
2007-12-01 01:19:02 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
sounds good
2007-12-01 01:20:28 · answer #9 · answered by A * T 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
there are very good love em
2007-12-01 01:19:28 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋