I didn't see this coming
It hit like a big surprise
Like a thief in the night
Stealing away my sunshine
Now I'm crawling on my hands and knees
Looking for the light
It hit me from the blind side
Now I don't know what to do
It hit me from the blind side
I cry out to You
I don't have any answers
Your ways are higher
Your love is stronger
And through this pain
You'll cover me
Your grace is greater
When there are no answers
And through this pain
You'll cover me
And through this pain
You'll cover me
I never thought this could happen
I'm living in my own nightmare
Are You even there?
Hanging on by a thread now
I'm begging for the pain to end
Will it ever end?
It hit me from the blind side
It's getting hard to breathe
It hit me from the blind side
The hurt, it feels so deep
And I don't have any answers
Now each night seems so long
I don't think I'm this strong
How many times can I ask why?
I can't believe this is real
2007-11-30 18:14:41 · 6 answers · asked by JJS 1 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
You have strong poetic skills. For me, a story of love lost is as exciting as riding a bus. A good love poem will make me read it all the way through over and over again. Yours didn't do this...I went right from S2 to S6...I would like to see how you write about something that makes your brain hurt. Everybody's heart hurts...TD
2007-12-01 01:42:23 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Good moral lessons. Trust in Him
He never shuts shuts one door but He opens another
9/10
2007-12-01 02:27:43 · answer #2 · answered by ari-pup 7 · 1⤊ 1⤋
I would give you a hundred percent!!! Nice poem you've got there. I like the way you describe the weakness, pain and misery in that poem you made. Keep it up!!!
2007-12-01 02:27:08 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋
10 out of 10.
Cause I love it!
2007-12-01 05:26:12 · answer #4 · answered by Analyst 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Good poem. It is showing your hurting and suffering side. I hope you are not feeling like that. God is always there.
2007-12-01 03:27:25 · answer #5 · answered by Nica 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
it's fantastic .!
i found it very touching !
keep it up! u r gifted !
keep working....u will succeed
2007-12-01 03:32:25 · answer #6 · answered by ashna 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋