plz people this si for today can someone read this paragraph and tell me if it makes sense any suggestions?

Question

Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth marriage and relationship is the opposite of the rest, is a symbol of love. Even though, at the beginning of the novel, they hate each other, after, their hate became an intense love. They admire each other because first they meet the true personality of each other behind their proud appearance. Their love becomes more powerful because of the courage they have to fight for what they want. He never gives up for her love. And she never pays attention to any threatening comments, especially the ones from Lady Catherine, who prohibit her to marry her nephew Darcy, because he is engaged with her daughter. Also another influential fact is that Elizabeth believes that getting married without love is a waste of time. She is not conformed to the traditional beliefs, that woman should get marry for security and economic protection. She considers it irrational. And so both, Darcy and Elizabeth make their own decisions breaking the rules of tradition to be together.

Answer 1

You have the germ of a good idea there, especially in your last sentence.

However, some of your sentences seem like a jumble of ideas that need to be sorted out. For example:

"They admire each other because first they meet the true personality of each other behind their proud appearance."

It sound there like you're jumbling the time frame and trying to say two things at once. That can be done, but it seems you don't know how to do it yet. It's not clear what you're saying. Do you mean that they immediately perceive the "true selves" behind their proud appearance, or that it takes them time to discover the "true selves" behind their proud appearances?

You could break such sentences into two or three separate thoughts; for example:

They both have proud appearances. Behind those proud appearances are their true personalities. Each meets the true personality of the other. They learn to admire each other.

Then re-combine the sentences according to what you're really trying to say. For example:

Eventually they discover in each other the true personality behind their proud appearances. They learn to admire each other.

Now, if you do mean that they discover each other's true personalities behind their proud appearances the first time that they meet, then say so, and say so clearly.

You may need a tutor or an intelligent classmate to help you learn to organize your sentences and paragraphs. However, you do have some good ideas in your paragraph. Good luck and God bless!

Answer 2

Sounds good. I would drop the words ...is a symbol of love. These words makes the sentence fragmented
and confuses the meaning. Just put a period after
'rest'. The next sentence is tough to read and follow. Try: In the beginning the relationship was strained but eventually they fell in love. The third sentence I would omit the word 'first'. The sentence will read better.

Answer 3

sounds to me like a soap opera or the maruy show. much is madup as u go along andeven adlibbed.. this saying is just like soap operas in real life they never happen at all like that mj