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I often wonder if my dreams
Are unique to me, alone
Intense, Swirling, Thrashing, Rolling
Colors turn to piercing tones
Strain to snap myself awake,
Break the vapors, Blue delusion,
Twisting, Turning, Searing, Burning
Stagnant time, true illusion
Move just once, my fingers clutch
That subtle twitch that means so much,
Grasping, holding, eye's molding,
Is she there,
Bodies touch,
Blink and think,
To the sunlight I reach,
Do I see you, shining, glowing, stop the flowing,
The battle has been won, "I'M AWAKE!"
*****
2007-11-30 02:34:23 · 6 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
I wrote this one in 1993, before I met Sheryl. She's an angel that makes nightmares go away.
2007-11-30 03:16:50 · update #1
WOW! I loved this poem, TD. Very cool. Seemed to come alive to my imagination when my eyes flew across the page.
2007-11-30 03:07:24 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
"Colors turn to piercing tones:" this is exactly what I mean when I say you paint a picture with words. Color and sound are closely related--red for anger, blue for calm (or depression). I wonder which color would make a piercing tone. Yellow, perhaps?
2007-11-30 02:57:08 · answer #2 · answered by Elaine P...is for Poetry 7 · 3⤊ 0⤋
some circumstances; every time i attempt to keep in mind the numbers yet can never undergo in strategies all of them, that's humorous 'cos while i flow get a value tag with those I do undergo in strategies, weirdly sufficient they have arise every time. disgrace that's basically ever 3 i will keep in mind. yet then i don't care approximately being prosperous.
2016-11-13 01:42:20 · answer #3 · answered by weichman 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
There is always hope
That dreams wont remain as dreams
Awakening is not as bad as it seems
For the full moon is shining with its brightest beams.
=)
---> i really do love your rhymes (esp the -ing) and expressions in this poem. It sounds so alive!
2007-11-30 02:54:21 · answer #4 · answered by Dark Dickinsonian 4 · 3⤊ 0⤋
WoW T.D. this is one really great poem.I loved how you talked about all your thrashing and turning' and how eloquently you chose your words.Your expressions are a poem their self..Bravo well done,.,
2007-11-30 03:01:40 · answer #5 · answered by Cami lives 6 · 2⤊ 0⤋
wow.. that was a really great poem u got there.
but no, never dreamed of winning a lottery before though.
that must be sweet!
*winks*
2007-11-30 03:11:20 · answer #6 · answered by Heaven Hill 7 · 2⤊ 0⤋