(I thought that might get some of you!)
For Dick.........
Euwaite his attention
went too far
with lady naked
no bra
He tried to keep
ahead of the rest
but floored himself
showing off
his breasts.
His attention to detail
was over the top
was this worth
him getting
them off?
He should have posted a good recipe for sourkraut sauce to be on the safe side.
2007-11-28 22:58:03 · 11 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
Tyler Durden first in the queue, trust you!
2007-11-28 23:11:17 · update #1
I was only doing what everyone wanted me to do...well...almost everyone.
2007-11-29 01:23:03 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 4⤊ 0⤋
Actually, this writer has two story lines going here...actually three, which needs resolving in a little better way1. the man 2. the lady 3. him on the floor(how'd he get there) and 4.how'd he get the breasts...okay 4 story lines. This poem is intriguing in format and message...that message is not as simple as it seems. To the author: you've got something going here, just straighten it up a bit and you've got a fine poem! Elysabeth Faslund...Poemhunter.com
2007-11-28 23:41:35 · answer #2 · answered by Elysabeth 7 · 2⤊ 0⤋
And you wuz right.
Euwaite (praise be upon him) stood up to the Yamster like the Chinese dissident stood up to the tanks in Tianenmen Square. Epic tales and sagas are made of this.
1 2 3 4, stick around and show me more. Catholic High School Girls in Trouble. Yeeehaw.
2007-11-29 04:16:13 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 3⤊ 0⤋
Haha! Of course he's gonna be the first in queue! Havent you read an article here that most pervs live in Berlin! haha. Interesting layout of bOObies you have captured in one witty poem! I wonder what our friend TD Euwaite would think of this.... after his account has just being suspended for the topless video... =)
2007-11-28 23:33:38 · answer #4 · answered by Dark Dickinsonian 4 · 4⤊ 0⤋
HI Moley I liked your poem ;it;s cute and if it's about out friendT.D. it's even better, Take care Peachie 1
2007-11-29 00:52:50 · answer #5 · answered by Cami lives 6 · 3⤊ 0⤋
Our friend likes a little danger. Fitting poem.
2007-11-29 08:05:54 · answer #6 · answered by Marguerite 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
And I did warn him yesterday, not to lean out to far and to remember OUR library. Retard.
2007-11-28 23:06:52 · answer #7 · answered by tyler durden Oƒƒicial 4 · 3⤊ 0⤋
He was punished because he is kind and writes well.
2007-11-29 07:35:57 · answer #8 · answered by Lady Annabella-VInylist 7 · 3⤊ 0⤋
OK, that does it... I am going to get fired for snorting my tea out all over my bosses desk. Thanks you evil mole!
2007-11-29 03:58:07 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 4⤊ 0⤋
Ha ha that is very funny.
2007-11-29 05:56:11 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 3⤊ 0⤋