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Anne's husband Fred had died over a year ago, that is when she went to live with her son, Tom chief of police. His wife Jackie, a loving caring woman employed as a bank teller, thought it would be a good idea to take Anne into their home to care for her. Connie seemed to be attentive and caring but her work was beginning to be too demanding and they decided that it was time to move her to the pallitive ward.
2007-11-28 17:19:50 · 6 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
this is just the middle of my scenario.
2007-11-28 17:24:41 · update #1
this is not the beginning of my scenario or ending, but please help me out please
2007-11-28 17:25:30 · update #2
Anne's husband Fred had died over a year ago. That is when she went to live with her son Tom who is the Chief of police. His wife Jackie, a loving and caring woman, who is employed as a bank teller, thought that it would be a good idea to take Annie into their home to care for her. Connie seemed to be attentive and caring but her work was beginning to be too demanding and they decided that it was time to move her to the palliative ward.
2007-11-28 17:28:45 · answer #1 · answered by she2sing 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋
You never said who Connie is...
This paragraph just rambles on and on....
Sorry, with the way that it is written here...I can't help you.
2007-11-28 22:34:42 · answer #2 · answered by Doodlebug 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Go into more detail on the ppl and that way you know who is who
2007-11-28 17:23:41 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
how about home care have you tried that.
2007-11-28 17:23:45 · answer #4 · answered by mitch 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
sounds boring...who cares?
2007-11-28 17:23:30 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
Is this a short story or what are you needing. Please elaborate
2007-11-28 17:24:23 · answer #6 · answered by feeona 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋