i need to proof read it any suggestions is for my a class i tried to fix it but i dont know what to fix
Like most Americans, Superman is an immigrant but an exceptional one. As many immigrants come from foreign countries by earthly transportation, Superman crash-lands on earth from another planet in his rocket ship. As a result immigrants and Superman become part of American, and both must follow the edifying behavior. However, Superman attains them well. Engle points out that his superpowers are “equivalent” to cultural characteristics that make immigrants stand out. In addition, many foreign settlers have dual personalities: one for their public persona, the other for their private life, to integrate little by little in their communities. Therefore, Superman simulates fragility and human characteristics to the public as Clark Kent. At home, he reveals his powerful and heroic character as Superman, utilizing a costume to protect his "human" identity. Altogether, immigrants and this heroic figure have new identities in their lives to assimilate into the American society.
2007-11-28 13:12:47 · 9 answers · asked by Jolie Vu 2 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
How's this? (It appears that you have a little trouble with transition and coherence. You recognize where a transition is needed, but you seem to put such expressions in arbitrarily, without fully thinking through the relationship you want to show between sentences.)
Like most Americans, Superman is an immigrant--but an exceptional one. Whereas most immigrants come from foreign countries by earthly transportation, Superman crash-lands on earth from another planet in his rocket ship. Nevertheless, immigrants and Superman both become part of America, and both must adapt to the prevailing culture. r, Superman does this well. Engle points out that his superpowers are “equivalent” to cultural characteristics that make immigrants stand out. In addition, just as many foreign settlers have dual personalities--one for their public persona, the other for their private life--to integrate little by little into their communities, Superman simulates fragility and human characteristics to the public as Clark Kent. At home, he reveals his powerful and heroic character as Superman, utilizing a costume to protect his "human" identity. Thus, both real-life immigrants and this heroic figure develop new identities to enable them to assimilate into American society.
2007-11-28 13:24:43 · answer #1 · answered by aida 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Like most Americans, Superman is an immigrant. However he is an exceptional one. While many American immigrants came from foreign countries by earthly transportation, Superman crash-lands on earth from another planet in his rocket ship. As a result immigrants and Superman become part of American, and both must follow the edifying behavior. Superman attains them well. Engle points out that his superpowers are “equivalent” to cultural characteristics that make immigrants stand out. In addition, many foreign settlers have dual personalities: one for their public persona, the other for their private life, to integrate little by little in their communities. Therefore, Superman simulates fragility and human characteristics to the public as Clark Kent. At home, he reveals his powerful and heroic character as Superman, utilizing a costume to protect his "human" identity. Altogether, immigrants and this heroic figure have new identities in their lives to assimilate into the American society.
Interesting ^_^
2007-11-28 13:17:00 · answer #2 · answered by Mandalions 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋
The difference between Superman and many illegal aliens is that Superman fought for truth, justice, and the American way. He didn't speak his native language, didn't demand that radio and television stations broadcast in his native language, and Clark Kent always paid his taxes!
2007-11-28 13:45:13 · answer #3 · answered by Rick K 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
". As a result immigrants and Superman become part of American"
Do you mean "America"
Other then that its great. :)
2007-11-28 13:16:13 · answer #4 · answered by Clint 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋
This makes absolute perfect sense. I am not 100% sure, though that you put a dash where it says crash lands. Hope you get a good grade!
2007-11-28 13:17:01 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
It's left-wing, feel-good, touchy-feely, pro illegal immigration crap. Typical of the BS, that the libs are brainwashing kids with in the educational system today.
Sorry.
2007-11-28 13:19:22 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 2⤋
in the 5th line, the 2nd to last word is that supposed to be America? not American? but besides that it sounds good.
2007-11-28 13:16:56 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
makes sense, but the grammar is wrong in some places.
2007-11-28 13:15:50 · answer #8 · answered by konig.swagger 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
your hook (da first sentence) dun make no cents
2007-11-28 13:20:29 · answer #9 · answered by Jennifer S 4 · 0⤊ 3⤋