“Just Friends”
When the moon comes out gleaming, it reminds me
Of your beauty, so enchanting, when the sun
Arises with the dawn, it’s singing our song.
When I’m sad and depressed, and my life feels
Like a mess, what am I to do except
Trust in you, just being with you brightens my
Day without any way for me to repay.
What I feel inside is what you could
Never deny, the power that over-
Whelms me, the power only you
Could see, I wish you knew how I feel,
I wish you knew that it’s a big deal.
We’re “just friends”, I want that to end, I want
You to know I want so much more, do I
Have to show you how much my heart’s sore, do
I have to buy dozens of roses, do
I have to make promises or proposes?
Although I’m very happy with what I got, to ruin
A good thing going… I really rather not, if being
“Just friends” my only chance to be with you
I guess my only chance is that my dream
Will come true, until you announce your love
For me, by your side I’ll always be!
2007-11-27 16:47:41 · 5 answers · asked by WiLd NaVaJo 1 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
My gosh I'm flabbergasted! That was amazing, your speech and wordings, It has much emotion that carries you away in a heartbeat, if this was for a girl I'd be dazzled with delightfulness!
I wish I was her :D
Keep writing I'd love to read more!
2007-11-27 16:57:28 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
Beautiful. Obviously written by someone so in love. Worthy of publication.
Keep on writing!
2007-11-28 00:55:41 · answer #2 · answered by boyplakwatsa.com 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
A thing of beauty!
2007-11-28 00:59:53 · answer #3 · answered by Ahmed Zia 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Woah!whoever you wrote that for is so so lucky~!
2007-11-28 11:25:37 · answer #4 · answered by ♥§o contagiou§♥ 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
wow...i'm speechless! that was amazing...heck, i actually feel loved! that was beautiful...wow.
2007-11-28 00:51:34 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋