Question that im basing my argumentaive essay upon =
Elderly parents should be cared for by their families and not live alone or in a nursing home.Agree or disagree?
I Agree to this question ..now toconclude athesis statement! help
2007-11-27 05:34:45 · 6 answers · asked by cookie c 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
How about "Caring for elderly patients at home improves their overall health, longevity, and quality of life."
2007-11-27 05:41:57 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
One of the best argument you can use is the record of abuses in nursing homes and I will give you a site to learn more about this.
You can also point out the entire industry of electronic devices to help those elderly living alone. You should point the abuses out in such a way as this though: "although some nursing facilities may be good for seniors, etc" Good Luck!
2007-11-27 05:44:19 · answer #2 · answered by Al B 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
There are some basic ideas to follow when you're trying to come up with a thesis statement.
Ask yourself what conclusions you can draw from the work you've already done. Then try naming the topic and making some assertive statement about it. For an example, if you were writing about preventing teen crime, you're thesis statement might read: "Juveniles can be diverted from crime by active learning programs, full time sports and intervention by mentors and positive role models."
In that case, the topic would be "Juveniles" and the assertion would be "can be diverted from crime in three ways."
Hope this helps!
2007-11-27 05:45:00 · answer #3 · answered by Marji 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i agree to a point. My mom and i was just talking about this. as she is not ready for this type of decision she is only 40. But anyways. She said that she would only want me to put her in a home if she really could remember who i or anyone was. Like developing elstimers. And i agreed with her. Cuase i really think old people when they start developing that then its like they live another life and all you do is a constant battle. or if she is extremly ill to be like bed renden and need medical attention 24-7
2007-11-27 05:40:43 · answer #4 · answered by chef_05_85 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
that is your thesis statement..elderly parents should be cared for.....etc..A thesis statement in an essay is a sentence that explicitly identifies the purpose of the paper or previews its main ideas.
2007-11-27 05:39:40 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
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2016-11-12 22:08:42 · answer #6 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋