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Dream Machine
Humm…buzz…ding ding ding
Oh what a beautiful thing, ding ding
Lookout world, here comes me
Ridding along on
On my dream machine
With a monotonous ring, ring, ring
Spitting oil, gas and steam
Ding ding ding ding ding
Oh my…what
A colorful scene
Skies of brown, seas of pink
Oh what a beautiful thing
Fish are floating in the sea
Don’t blame me
Ding ding ding ding
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2007-11-27 02:23:51 · 8 answers · asked by TD Euwaite? 6 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
This is a cool poem. I think that I can actually hear the dream machine ding ding ding. The sound and movement of the words help create clip and imagery within the poem. This poem is very whimsical and reading it made me smile.
2007-11-27 05:18:50 · answer #1 · answered by Sptfyr 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
The -ing rhymes had nearly drove me nuts! haha =)
--->the sound is like pricking in my ears lol
2007-11-27 10:32:15 · answer #2 · answered by Dark Dickinsonian 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
You're having a wee bit too much fun.
2007-11-27 14:20:48 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
sounds like a machine allright. lol.
nice poem.
2007-11-27 13:11:56 · answer #4 · answered by Analyst 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
This one's good, but I like the other one better....
2007-11-27 14:48:10 · answer #5 · answered by Reenie: Mom of Marine 6 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Ding dong, bing bong,
bong bong bong...
familiar with it much?
2007-11-27 11:39:49 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
it's about your yellow submarine, isn't it ?
yeah, I like it...
2007-11-27 10:29:17 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
really nice, I like it,too. well done;)
2007-11-27 10:31:57 · answer #8 · answered by Blup 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋