i am writing a new song and i can't get anyhting done except half the first verse. it goes like this:
my heart is empty but my head is full,
thoughts of you keep coming back to me.
do you have any suggestions, if you do and i get to record the song, i will include your name, that is, if i like your answer.
2007-11-26 14:57:21 · 6 answers · asked by smartestgirlintheworld 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music ➔ Lyrics
i cant get rid of the pain inside,
but i still dont want you back with me
I know our love is void and null,
but the past is all that i can see
The first answer from sum1 esle is awesome tho.
2007-11-26 15:09:03 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Call me cruel, but I refuse to play the fool,
I see how we could be, but I know how we should be.
or...
You and me are an exeption to the rule,
I see how it could be, but I know how it should be.
Well, play with those and maybe you can make it sound better. Add or subtract a word, maybe use both. Good luck with your songs.
2007-11-26 23:26:27 · answer #2 · answered by Big B 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
thoughts that rise and fall all through my mind
like sailboats tossed upon an angry sea
pushed ever forward into consciousness
like waves surging to the shore
memories rising to majestic heights
to crash and splinter on the seabed of life’s floor
2007-11-26 23:07:41 · answer #3 · answered by deadkelly_1 6 · 2⤊ 1⤋
and i keep trying to write a song
telling the world you did me wrong
and I realise at sometime I loved you
how could.....
2007-11-27 10:25:00 · answer #4 · answered by rc 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
They sparkle like an exotic jewel
reminders of how it used to be.
2007-11-26 23:03:05 · answer #5 · answered by Blessed 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
but thoughts are only thoughts
and my stomach's tied in knots
2007-11-26 23:08:23 · answer #6 · answered by another-thing 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋