I need a good thesis statement!?

Question

Okay, so I'm doing this HUGE essay on the aztec culture and it's really really important. Everything is fine, but i'm struggling with my thesis statement. So far I got: "The Aztec culture is one of the most interesting diverse culture out there with many things to offer someone willing to learn abot them."

ughhhhhhhh! it's bad, eh? help me!

Answer 1

One of the most interesting and diverse cultures is that of the Aztecs which offers an opportunity to those willing to learn from them.

Answer 2

Yeah, it's a start... Spell check is going to help your grade.

Why is the Aztec culture interesting.

or


Why is the Aztec culture diverse. and why is that interesting.

or

Name three things the Aztec culture offers for someone willing to learn.

Your thesis statement should recap the three or four main outline points you are writing your story from. The 3 or 4 big things your story is about.

Answer 3

Since your essay is huge, content-wise, you might want to use a thesis statement that just begins at the beginning. For example,

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You will have to reword that, though, since it is copied verbatim from a website called "The Aztec Culture" and your teacher will know right away that it is not in your own words.

Answer 4

You have to be more specific, put your main paragraph topics in your thesis statement. For example Mass production, increase of population, progression of technology, child labor, increase of tuberculoses, and pollution are the positive and negative effects of the Industrial Revolution. No, you don’t pick a side. Try not to be bias just write about the negative and positive effects. In your paragraphs, you topic sentence should be something like this, of course it depends what you picked as your effects. Mass production is a positive effect of the Industrial Revolution because (say why it was a positive effect). After your topic sentence, prove your topic sentence with evidence from sources such as your book or an article on the internet. What ever you use, cite your sources.

Answer 5

Not to be mean, but yeah it sucks! How about setting your context first with something like "There are many cultures that have contributed to the rich history of the lands we now inhabit. You can go back to the ancient times when many cultures began to emerge and became legends. The Romans, for example set precedence for....... try something like that. Grab their attention or even start by asking a trvia question to gauage their interest! Hope this is helpful!

Answer 6

The Aztec culture happens to be one of the most interesting and diverse of ancient cultures, and has much to offer for those willing to learn of such.

Answer 7

The Aztec culture has made a huge impact on many people and

their way of life, their society has grown due to the abundance

amount of people following them.


try that one?

Answer 8

talk about the Toltecs or maybe about how they were vastly different from other world cultures at the time

also, I have a question for you

why is this in "Lesbian, Gay, Bisexual, and Transgendered?"

Answer 9

I bet thesis statement ought to be specific, am I right?