Family pictures
I see your family pictures...
you are one happy family indeed
i imagine the occasions you have...
must be really heart warming...
the smiles, the laughters and cheers!
how fortunate you all are...
that it sends tears in my eyes!
i shiver at the realization of my own misfortune!
a sharp and bitter pain i can't explain...
it brings me down to my knees!
i bite my nails... i am speechless...
it amazes me...
how life works...
it shatters me to the core!
2007-11-25 21:17:18 · 11 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
As far as poetry goes, it's an expressive outpouring of emotion. It needs some work to make it a great poem but it is very heart rending as it is. I can relate very well. Too well, I am afraid.
2007-11-26 04:10:42 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 3⤊ 0⤋
Let me guess, Your in Love With A Married Man Who Has A Family? Really, You Just Like The Concept Of A Family, Probably Not Him? Don't Sweat It ... When You Grow A Little Older, You Can Get Married And Have Lots Of Babies, Then Get Their Pictures Taken All The Time. Nice Poem....
Oh, I'm Just Guessing About The Meaning Of That Poem. I Could Be Wrong.
2007-11-26 17:02:37 · answer #2 · answered by ? 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
aww... girl. your family may suck but learn from their mistakes- no matter how bad they may be. each member of your family has a history and a story & sometimes people get caught up in bad situations. try to think about that. let me say this however:
your family does not define you.
seriously, the best people have come from the worst misfortune. take what you've learned from your family & use those lessons to provide your husband/children with the best homelife (if that's what you wish to do).
2007-11-26 05:29:38 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
Yes, it's ok, but only ok. Still, something like this should be put into a journal: Letters to Myself, for example. Then, you'll have poetic letters as well as a record of how you felt at any given moment. So, to sum up: as a poem it's only ok, but as a poetic letter, it's super!
2007-11-26 06:04:06 · answer #4 · answered by Elaine P...is for Poetry 7 · 2⤊ 0⤋
hmmmm, I like it, a little over the top with the last line, but I like it anyway. I have seen those pictures too and they make me fel the same way. Cymbalta does not help.
2007-11-26 15:14:11 · answer #5 · answered by The Dark Prince 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Its a heartfelt poem and that's what matters, I like it very much but I think it is unfinished, keep it and you'll find that on another day you can add a little more to it.
Good luck and keep writing, and if possible let us read more.
2007-11-26 05:30:19 · answer #6 · answered by Dragon Prince 5 · 1⤊ 1⤋
I loved your poem as it sounds just like me ' as i have no family alive ' except for my son/People are so over joyed of mothers day and fathers day' which i have never celebrated ' and have been berated for having none...Take care my friend..Peachie 1
2007-11-26 15:01:57 · answer #7 · answered by Cami lives 6 · 1⤊ 1⤋
a picture is worth a thousand words, but you can't see
the whole picture from a glance.
2007-11-26 19:34:44 · answer #8 · answered by Mary S 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I like it, it's good to write like that. Just write whatever is on your mind and it becomes beautiful because it's young and it can grow into magnificent butterfly.
2007-11-26 05:29:26 · answer #9 · answered by ? 4 · 1⤊ 1⤋
Different strokes for different folks I suppose.
2007-11-26 05:25:18 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 1⤋