The darkness of the night, it holds us in its arms;
As i look down into your eyes they are your fatal charms.
A bit of pain, a moan and then, my love i give to you;
When i touch i need not ask its like i always knew.
The sweet taste of your lips, the sweat upon your brow;
The movement of your supple hips, Two have become one now.
I never want this moment to end so clutch you oh so near;
I start to shake my vision blurs and i whisper in your ear.
My words sound strange, things i have never said, i wont ever take them back;
I mean everything i say that why you hug me back.
True love is a thing that most will never know;
The promise of the heart that you will never be alone.
2007-11-24 16:43:11 · 5 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
WOW!!!that was awsomly romantic!!!
wow!!! are you a poet!!
that was really good!!
2007-11-24 16:52:46 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
You are very romantic now that you have found a lover, and thank you for sharing this in a creative way.
This one seems to almost be made for music.
2007-11-24 21:29:59 · answer #2 · answered by Your Uncle Dodge! 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
so true. I love this poem a lot!! it's all true and romantic, passionate. this came from a personal experience, didn't it??
2007-11-24 17:19:57 · answer #3 · answered by Kit-Kat 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
LOVE U!!...wow that was awesome! that's sooo romantic! ♥
2007-11-24 16:51:21 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
so? is this poetry? i expect more from poetry
2007-11-24 16:50:46 · answer #5 · answered by Theta40 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋