if we touch tonight
will feelings fade
into return,
but again.
we speak
in unspoken way
brushed with aroma
a scent unfading.
i walk this way
on a path,,,,
unseen.
wondering once again
will this foolish feeling fade,,,
into darkness?
just leave me be? please.
D.
2007-11-24 09:36:18 · 8 answers · asked by dorian 3 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
poem
indeed
john
2007-12-02 07:56:19 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very nice, many poems get put to music,
just think Robert Burns
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Embrace the smell
Of sweet love
Holding hands
Under the moonlit sky
Scents walk intertwined
Blind love sheilds eyes
As a world moves around
Unnoticed by joined lovers
True love or foolish love
A kiss in the dark
Better than never chasing
A smile across a room
As the bard says
Better to have loved
Than to never have loved
Chase the scent, aroma , the smile
2007-11-24 18:04:58 · answer #2 · answered by steven m 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Poem
2007-11-24 17:47:22 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Its more like a poem, because a song would say what was happening say one detail and move on
2007-11-24 19:37:05 · answer #4 · answered by robin 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
poem, the continuity isn't there for a song.
2007-11-24 17:39:37 · answer #5 · answered by Always Question 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
poen nice too
2007-11-24 17:39:51 · answer #6 · answered by emma_undoo 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think it could be both
2007-11-24 17:39:08 · answer #7 · answered by flowerchildofthecorn 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
verse.
2007-11-24 17:43:26 · answer #8 · answered by snowbaal 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋