BEGGINING
Im trapped, trapped in my mind again
Seeing the same thing over and over again.
Cause i loved you even when you brought me down.
I cant get you out of mind and I know you'll never be mine.
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CHORUS
You are the story of my life, you are the only thing i lived for and you , you are the only thing by my side.
Tearing me down helping me up over and over again.
I want to hear your voice and say I love you again.
I'd do anthing, yes I'd do anything for a happy ending.
Cause you are the story of my life.
The only dream the only night mare.
The story never ever ends.
I depend on you.
I dont have a clue what to hold on to.
(repeat)
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ENDING
I will let my gaurd down for you
cause I know our love is it true
and I know I'll never be through with you
2007-11-24 02:05:01 · 7 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music ➔ Lyrics
Your lyrics seem to convey a very powerful message. On that alone I would say that they're great. However, to truly know, i would have to know a melody, rhythm, and underlying harmony. As I am sure you are aware, there are songs out there with crappy lyrics, and a catchy hook and melody, and they make it to the top. So if you want your terrific lyrics to make it out into the world, work on the music. But as I stated, the lyrics are very nice.
If you wish to discuss further, please contact me.
Hope that helped.
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2016-09-05 12:59:27 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think they are very strong and commercial. There's many songs that sound like those words, however, so to distinguish yourself the melody you assign to these will have to stand out.
2007-11-24 02:21:46 · answer #3 · answered by Your Uncle Dodge! 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
have you heard of 30 seconds to mars?
because they sing a song.
and it goes.
This is the story of my life.
i doubt you knew that, so i am not saying you copied them.
but, overall good. umm, maybe write more about other things asides loving guys and girls and such, as it is cliched.
2007-11-24 02:15:33 · answer #4 · answered by Lucy M 1 · 0⤊ 1⤋
It is actually pretty good!
2007-11-24 02:08:05 · answer #5 · answered by theann 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
im stealing them and singing them...haha j.k very good
2007-11-24 02:11:38 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
it so pretty can i copy it it pretty you a singe or
2007-11-24 02:13:10 · answer #7 · answered by princesse haiti 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋